Two people talk about facility for unwanted infants. I want to analyze how they try to explain or make us believe.
Letter 1
The author talks about his experience. She works with disabled adults, some of whom were abandoned, and she says overcoming losses of significant people is a major issue for such people.
The author talks about the facts. People can abandon infant children, but a 3-year-old toddler were found in the facility.
Using one's experiences allows readers to be in there or feel the author's feelings. I could know why she want to insist like Letter 1 because I could know her situation. The more we know the person, the more we can trust. Using experience is good way.
Using facts is more effective because they are "facts." Facts allow readers to trust easily. We can think about the problem carefully because it was occured actually.
Letter 2
The author shows an occurence in Japan some years ago. A baby of a junior high school student and her boyfriend wa abandoned in a nearby temple in cold weather and died.
Showing a fact makes people trust easily. This is an effect way.
My opinion
I agree with the author of Letter 1. Perhaps there are some people who can not afford to raise children because of money problem. However, are all people who abandon their child suffering from money problem or in the situation that they really can not raise their child? I think not they aren't.
Surely, the Baby Hatch is a good idea. This can save children from death. However, People should rather live with thier children in any case than abondon them. So, I agree the idea of the agency. This is big scale, but the goverment should do. I think it's better way to save children better than set the Baby Hatch.
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You agreed with different person from the person I took but I like your opinion about letter 1.
I nearly understand that all people abandon their children because of the lack of money and the predicament but you said you didn't think so. Do you have any other idea?
I also think that nothing is better for people to live with their children.
I could understand how each two persons persuade readers to believe their insistence easily as I read your contents.
I agree with your opinion.Parents should not abandon their children even if there are some problems such as money problem as you wrote,but Baby hatch is good when some accident happened!
I agree to your opinion. Life is precious so we can't replace life with money. I hope more and more people realize that.
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